W.P.4 Zero draft

W.P 4 Zero draft

School, you want more of it?

 I. Introduction

          Hook: Narrative or definition or brief grand tour about the topic Year round schooling is public school that has what they call a more balanced schedule where they only have a 4 week summer break and longer every other break but it makes it seem like the school year does not stop.

          Thesis: There should not be year round schooling, so that the students can have a summer to work or play a sport, and so the administration can get a break.

II.  Subheads for Body paragraph 1

          Topic sentence: There should not be year round schooling so students can work to help pay for the family or play a sport and have time for a season.

III. Subheads for Body paragraph 2

          Topic sentence: There should be year round schooling so the students do not get board.

IV.  Subheads for Body paragraph 3

          Topic sentence: There should not be year round schooling so the administration can get a break.

V.  Subheads for Body paragraph 4

          Topic sentence: There should be year round schooling because the students will remember what they learned in the previous semester and that means less reviewing.

VII. Conclusion: Therefore year round schooling is bad because it does not allow time for a long enough break.