Tuesday, November 6, 2012

W.P. 4 Zero Draft


Kevin Horgan
Lee
English 103
November 7, 2012
Made in America?
 I. Introduction
          Hook: In a country where the number of jobs outsourced is nearly the same number as the current unemployment rate, should Americans worry or does outsourcing jobs benefit the country?
          Background (optional): 
          Thesis: The practice of outsourcing labor is becoming a more and more prevalent topic in todays news, leaving US citizens wondering what is in store for the future of their country.
II.  All around costs overseas are considerably cheaper whether it be labor costs, overhead costs, or taxes.
          Topic sentence:  By outsourcing labor, companies avoid overhead costs like utilities, buying and maintaining production equipment, and indirect labor.
III. Overseas countries have less burdensome regulations
          Topic sentence: According to the results of a survey of over 13,000 business executives worldwide published in the World Economic Forum’s Global Competitiveness Report 2011/12, there are 57 countries with less burdensome regulations than the United States.

IV.  Job loss/unemployment in America as a result of outsourcing jobs.
          Topic sentence: Between 2008 and 2010, 450,000 U.S. job losses were attributed to imports from China, a figure plucked from an “economic model” at the Economic Policy Institute.

V.  Work conditions in overseas factories
          Topic sentence: Eyewitnesses and ex-workers noted the extremely bright lights throughout the factory, 24-hour work shifts, standing, and on a $22 a day salary nonetheless.

VI.  Effects on the lives of overseas factory workers
          Topic sentence: The amount of families who are split up due to the location of their job is astonishing.  So many parents have sacrificed seeing their kids to support their families.

VII. Conclusion
            One can’t deny that there aren’t any beneficial reasons for a company to outsource its labor, but do the positives out weigh the negatives?   

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